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  1. Default Truths of The Heart

    The second and last poem i have ever written. Enjoy.


  2. Default Re: Truths of The Heart

    I don't want to be a jerk, a grammar nazi or anything, I just think that without those few mistakes it would be better.
    As I see* or As I've seen*?, your pain*, your name*.

    Anyway, it's a nice poem, did you post your first one?

    EDIT: Should've looked before asking. I like this poem more than the first one. :)
    Last edited by Words; 2012-02-01 at 09:02 PM.



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