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Truths of The Heart
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The second and last poem i have ever written. Enjoy.

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I don't want to be a jerk, a grammar nazi or anything, I just think that without those few mistakes it would be better.
As I see* or As I've seen*?, your pain*, your name*.

Anyway, it's a nice poem, did you post your first one?

EDIT: Should've looked before asking. I like this poem more than the first one. Smile
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