2012-01-26, 02:26 AM
The second and last poem i have ever written. Enjoy.
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Truths of The Heart
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I don't want to be a jerk, a grammar nazi or anything, I just think that without those few mistakes it would be better.
As I see* or As I've seen*?, your pain*, your name*. Anyway, it's a nice poem, did you post your first one? EDIT: Should've looked before asking. I like this poem more than the first one.
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