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Truths of The Heart - MtDewGod - 2012-01-26
The second and last poem i have ever written. Enjoy.
Spoiler
Truths of The Heart - Words - 2012-02-01
I don't want to be a jerk, a grammar nazi or anything, I just think that without those few mistakes it would be better.
As I see* or As I've seen*?, your pain*, your name*.
Anyway, it's a nice poem, did you post your first one?
EDIT: Should've looked before asking. I like this poem more than the first one.
