2008-07-02, 06:29 PM (This post was last modified: 2008-07-02, 06:44 PM by Mira.)
First, if you want to improve your comics read This.
Ok, you have good ideas. The thing that turns me off the most is no background. The background is very important, and white space is... eh, it looks bad. I would also suggest trimming the chat boxes, and making some of the 2 or 3 panneled comics longer next time.
Read my guide, It has alot of good stuff in it, and if you have any questions just ask! =)
Mira Wrote:First, if you want to improve your comics read This.
Ok, you have good ideas. The thing that turns me off the most is no background. The background is very important, and white space is... eh, it looks bad. I would also suggest trimming the chat boxes, and making some of the 2 or 3 panneled comics longer next time.
Read my guide, It has alot of good stuff in it, and if you have any questions just ask! =)
I dont like digging for half an hour in perion corner just for a good backgound for like, 5 comics. Its really hard cause it is unorganized and just plain stupid. Thanks for the advice though.
2008-07-02, 07:18 PM (This post was last modified: 2008-07-02, 07:22 PM by Mira.)
ablu2 Wrote:I dont like digging for half an hour in perion corner just for a good backgound for like, 5 comics. Its really hard cause it is unorganized and just plain stupid. Thanks for the advice though.
Lots of people use BG's from that site, and they're pretty nice. I still think making your own BG is the best, but these are alot better then no BG at all. What do you like better; a comic w/ or w/o a BG? ^^
Lots of people use BG's from that site, and they're pretty nice. I still think making your own BG is the best, but these are alot better then no BG at all. What do you like better; a comic w/ or w/o a BG? ^^
thanks, ill check it out!
Edit: Ok the backgrounds there stink... maybe ill make a few perion corner backgrounds.
Viper Wrote:Sweet, can't wait to see what happens next!!
Im not sure if im going to continue this comic for a while. Btw isnt it obvious what will happen next? Just think for a minute about what could happen next.
ablu2 Wrote:Im not sure if im going to continue this comic for a while. Btw isnt it obvious what will happen next? Just think for a minute about what could happen next.
its good for a start, tho i think u should use the "final attack"-attack a bit less because killing plants/enemies with the same technique over and over again starts to get a lil boring after a while
I saw this a sleepy a while ago. I liked the storyline, but I never really liked the boxes.
Anyhow, it is a well-made project, as far as the storyline goes. I noticed that each character has its own set personality, which I admire. It is rare to find maple comics with this.
I think found out why everything suddenly became boring and went to a halt. Fate is telling me to continue with the comics! I will continue with the much anticipated end to season 1!
I guess i met u on maplestory and you told me to put character code down so ya... here it is <bannedstory version="3.0"><character><01082149/><00020005 c="2" e="blink"/><01062053/><00030050 c="5"/><00002000/><01042099/><01002006/><01102041/></character></bannedstory>
Ok here is the character code u asked for <bannedstory version="3.0"><character><00020000 c="2" e="blink"/><01060006/><00030020 c="7"/><00002000/><01472000/><01040010/><01002109/></character></bannedstory>