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Ablus Adventures! - ablu2 - 2008-07-02

GUYS! I added a background like you said, even though it takes forever! It took forever to finish this newest one so read it and like it! >Sad

Newest release:
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"The Beginning"
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"Stranded"
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"The Fight"
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"Saved"
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Season Finale:

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"Extras"
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Ablus Adventures! - Mira - 2008-07-02

First, if you want to improve your comics read This.

Ok, you have good ideas. The thing that turns me off the most is no background. The background is very important, and white space is... eh, it looks bad. I would also suggest trimming the chat boxes, and making some of the 2 or 3 panneled comics longer next time. Smile

Read my guide, It has alot of good stuff in it, and if you have any questions just ask! =)

Ablus Adventures! - wobbufet - 2008-07-02

It's such a simple comic, and yet I enjoyed reading through the whole thing, I liked it!

Ablus Adventures! - ablu2 - 2008-07-02

Mira Wrote:First, if you want to improve your comics read This.

Ok, you have good ideas. The thing that turns me off the most is no background. The background is very important, and white space is... eh, it looks bad. I would also suggest trimming the chat boxes, and making some of the 2 or 3 panneled comics longer next time. Smile

Read my guide, It has alot of good stuff in it, and if you have any questions just ask! =)

I dont like digging for half an hour in perion corner just for a good backgound for like, 5 comics. Its really hard cause it is unorganized and just plain stupid. Thanks for the advice though.

Ablus Adventures! - Mira - 2008-07-02

ablu2 Wrote:I dont like digging for half an hour in perion corner just for a good backgound for like, 5 comics. Its really hard cause it is unorganized and just plain stupid. Thanks for the advice though.

Here you go.

Lots of people use BG's from that site, and they're pretty nice. I still think making your own BG is the best, but these are alot better then no BG at all. What do you like better; a comic w/ or w/o a BG? ^^

Ablus Adventures! - ablu2 - 2008-07-02

Mira Wrote:Here you go.

Lots of people use BG's from that site, and they're pretty nice. I still think making your own BG is the best, but these are alot better then no BG at all. What do you like better; a comic w/ or w/o a BG? ^^

thanks, ill check it out!

Edit: Ok the backgrounds there stink... maybe ill make a few perion corner backgrounds.

Ablus Adventures! - Viper - 2008-07-07

Sweet, can't wait to see what happens next!!

Ablus Adventures! - ablu2 - 2008-07-07

Viper Wrote:Sweet, can't wait to see what happens next!!

Im not sure if im going to continue this comic for a while. Btw isnt it obvious what will happen next? Just think for a minute about what could happen next.

Ablus Adventures! - Rain - 2008-07-20

ablu2 Wrote:Im not sure if im going to continue this comic for a while. Btw isnt it obvious what will happen next? Just think for a minute about what could happen next.
i would rather be in suspense.. Redface

Ablus Adventures! - KatanaKiwi - 2008-07-22

its good for a start, tho i think u should use the "final attack"-attack a bit less because killing plants/enemies with the same technique over and over again starts to get a lil boring after a while

Ablus Adventures! - ZuWrath - 2008-07-22

I saw this a sleepy a while ago. I liked the storyline, but I never really liked the boxes.

Anyhow, it is a well-made project, as far as the storyline goes. I noticed that each character has its own set personality, which I admire. It is rare to find maple comics with this.

Good job.

Ablus Adventures! - brightangel - 2008-07-22

Not bad, not bad at all.
I like it. You should conitnue it. Please do continue .=)

Ablus Adventures! - ablu2 - 2008-07-29

Thanks for the positive energy guys! Maybe I will make some more b4 summer is over... and I do try to create different properties.

Ablus Adventures! - brightangel - 2008-07-30

Yay, you go continue those comics, while I go get some popcorn.=)

Ablus Adventures! - ablu2 - 2008-10-27

I think found out why everything suddenly became boring and went to a halt. Fate is telling me to continue with the comics! I will continue with the much anticipated end to season 1!

Ablus Adventures! - JezzaRules - 2008-10-31

You could do with a background in all your comics, that way it'll appear better for others. Despite your comics being simple, nice work!

Ablus Adventures! - WindRigger - 2008-11-05

I guess i met u on maplestory and you told me to put character code down so ya... here it is <bannedstory version="3.0"><character><01082149/><00020005 c="2" e="blink"/><01062053/><00030050 c="5"/><00002000/><01042099/><01002006/><01102041/></character></bannedstory>

Ablus Adventures! - ablu2 - 2008-11-06

Can you give me the code for the character I met you on? I cant seem to think of a good use for the one you gave me.

Ablus Adventures! - WindRigger - 2008-11-06

Ok here is the character code u asked for Big Grin <bannedstory version="3.0"><character><00020000 c="2" e="blink"/><01060006/><00030020 c="7"/><00002000/><01472000/><01040010/><01002109/></character></bannedstory>

Ablus Adventures! - ablu2 - 2008-11-07

Ok thanks now go post other places.