My new batch of Comics

To those who don't know me, I'm Jezza and I am the creator of the Hat Thief comics on Basilmarket. I've been working on the Hat Thief comics as well as this new series I'm going to show you all. I can't post all of this on imageshack as all those files are kidna big and may take ages to upload all of them at once.
Well here's my set of comics I made with Bannedstory, I hope you like it.
After you read some of them, please post your comment below and give a brief feedback. It would definately help me with my next episodes.

Note: The comics are on the top left corner where you see five pictures...

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Crystal of Destruction Volume 1 (Prologue)http://www.profil3.com/blog/14402/0/COD_...logue.html

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Crystal of Destruction Volume 2 (The Assault)http://www.profil3.com/blog/14899/0/COD_...sault.html

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Crystal of Destruction Volume 3 (Departure of Ellinia)http://www.profil3.com/blog/15457/0/COD_...linia.html

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Crystal of Destruction Volume 4 (The Bowman Village of Henesys)http://www.profil3.com/blog/25753/0/COD_...nesys.html

Those are some really organised comics. I just feel a bit lost though, it gives from a little girl talking to Grendel, then the subject changes to an Assault, and then a mage attacking a thief? I don't quite see a concection there, but it was impressive and very very well done. Also many many props for the comedy in the last one, ROFL!

heh, the beginning vaguely reminds me of the early part of Golden Sun. If my name isn't a clue, that's a good thing. ;p One thing I would recommend is running your dialog through a spelling/Grammar check before you put it into the comics. You mixed up Your/You're quite a few times.

heh, the beginning vaguely reminds me of the early part of Golden Sun. If my name isn't a clue, that's a good thing. ;p One thing I would recommend is running your dialog through a spelling/Grammar check before you put it into the comics. You mixed up Your/You're quite a few times.

I already knew that ur name is from Golden Sun, I used 2 be a big fan of GS and GS2 (coz I like collecting rare drops from various mobs). The only bummer is that I STILL can't find that darn Lachesis Rule off the Mad Demons.
Anyway on topic, thanks for the advice, yes I know that I get 'Your' and 'You're' mixed up easily =P.

Organization of different panels: 7/10 Try making them closer together
Fighting: 8/10 most of the time i have no idea what theyre doing.
Storyline: 3/10 it reminds me of the movie tron where i had no idea what in the world was going on the whole movie.
Misc: 6/10 dont just post a few links to your comic, take the photobucket pics and copy the bottom text and post it here. I dont like having to click several links.

Overall: 6/10 nice but you could have done better easily, needs work.

Yes, I agree, you could of done better. Especially with the humor. It was okay in these comics, but looking at your previous works, you definetly could of done better.

More humor please =D.

I acutally like the comic. It was kind of annoying to keep clicking on the next comic. But overall I really liked it. Continue PLEASE!

Eh, I kind liked it better when you made comedies like the Hat Thief.

I liked the plotline of the comic quite a lot.

Yay, comedy! =) (up to part 5)
Excellent job...especially with Athena's editing. I'd assume it's really hard making an npc move and talk like a Mapler...

Yay, comedy! =) (up to part 5)
Excellent job...especially with Athena's editing. I'd assume it's really hard making an npc move and talk like a Mapler...

I think he used Athena's clone, actually. It would be a good idea to use it, atleast... xD

I think he used Athena's clone, actually. It would be a good idea to use it, atleast... xD

Yea I did actually only i used the clones head but the body is a mapler.

Yea I did actually only i used the clones head but the body is a mapler.

Nice, Jezza! That's pretty creative, you know!