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My new batch of Comics - JezzaRules - 2008-07-31
To those who don't know me, I'm Jezza and I am the creator of the Hat Thief comics on Basilmarket. I've been working on the Hat Thief comics as well as this new series I'm going to show you all. I can't post all of this on imageshack as all those files are kidna big and may take ages to upload all of them at once.
Well here's my set of comics I made with Bannedstory, I hope you like it.
After you read some of them, please post your comment below and give a brief feedback. It would definately help me with my next episodes.
Note: The comics are on the top left corner where you see five pictures...
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My new batch of Comics - iiMarik - 2008-07-31
Those are some really organised comics. I just feel a bit lost though, it gives from a little girl talking to Grendel, then the subject changes to an Assault, and then a mage attacking a thief? I don't quite see a concection there, but it was impressive and very very well done. Also many many props for the comedy in the last one, ROFL!
My new batch of Comics - IsaacGS - 2008-07-31
heh, the beginning vaguely reminds me of the early part of Golden Sun. If my name isn't a clue, that's a good thing. ;p One thing I would recommend is running your dialog through a spelling/Grammar check before you put it into the comics. You mixed up Your/You're quite a few times.
My new batch of Comics - JezzaRules - 2008-07-31
IsaacGS Wrote:heh, the beginning vaguely reminds me of the early part of Golden Sun. If my name isn't a clue, that's a good thing. ;p One thing I would recommend is running your dialog through a spelling/Grammar check before you put it into the comics. You mixed up Your/You're quite a few times.
I already knew that ur name is from Golden Sun, I used 2 be a big fan of GS and GS2 (coz I like collecting rare drops from various mobs). The only bummer is that I STILL can't find that darn Lachesis Rule off the Mad Demons.
Anyway on topic, thanks for the advice, yes I know that I get 'Your' and 'You're' mixed up easily =P.
My new batch of Comics - ablu2 - 2008-07-31
Organization of different panels: 7/10 Try making them closer together
Fighting: 8/10 most of the time i have no idea what theyre doing.
Storyline: 3/10 it reminds me of the movie tron where i had no idea what in the world was going on the whole movie.
Misc: 6/10 dont just post a few links to your comic, take the photobucket pics and copy the bottom text and post it here. I dont like having to click several links.
Overall: 6/10 nice but you could have done better easily, needs work.
My new batch of Comics - Corn - 2008-07-31
Yes, I agree, you could of done better. Especially with the humor. It was okay in these comics, but looking at your previous works, you definetly could of done better.
More humor please =D.
My new batch of Comics - brightangel - 2008-07-31
I acutally like the comic. It was kind of annoying to keep clicking on the next comic. But overall I really liked it. Continue PLEASE!
My new batch of Comics - TheSmartGuy - 2008-08-28
Eh, I kind liked it better when you made comedies like the Hat Thief.
My new batch of Comics - Blankout - 2008-08-28
I liked the plotline of the comic quite a lot.
My new batch of Comics - Corn - 2008-08-28
Yay, comedy! =) (up to part 5)
Excellent job...especially with Athena's editing. I'd assume it's really hard making an npc move and talk like a Mapler...
My new batch of Comics - Mira - 2008-08-28
ClawofBeta Wrote:Yay, comedy! =) (up to part 5)
Excellent job...especially with Athena's editing. I'd assume it's really hard making an npc move and talk like a Mapler...
I think he used Athena's clone, actually. It would be a good idea to use it, atleast... xD
My new batch of Comics - JezzaRules - 2008-08-28
Mira Wrote:I think he used Athena's clone, actually. It would be a good idea to use it, atleast... xD
Yea I did actually only i used the clones head but the body is a mapler.
My new batch of Comics - Mira - 2008-08-28
JezzaRules Wrote:Yea I did actually only i used the clones head but the body is a mapler.
Nice, Jezza!
That's pretty creative, you know!