2012-01-25, 01:01 AM
Gotta start with the basics, bro.
The proportions are way off. To be fair, it's a bit of a difficult pose because he's mostly looking at you straight on. Is he sitting up straight? Is he leaning forward a bit? Is he hunching forward a lot? It's hard for me to tell. Foreshortening is tricky.
We can look at folds later. Can't make believable folds if what they're covering isn't believable.
The proportions are way off. To be fair, it's a bit of a difficult pose because he's mostly looking at you straight on. Is he sitting up straight? Is he leaning forward a bit? Is he hunching forward a lot? It's hard for me to tell. Foreshortening is tricky.
We can look at folds later. Can't make believable folds if what they're covering isn't believable.