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Looking for help in Art - Nion - 2012-01-24
Hey there, people of SP.
I was wondering whether you guys and gals are able to help me with this problem I have.
Currently, I'm trying to improve my artwork a lot in order to impress some people.
Is there anyone here able to critique a sample of my work?
I feel as if getting feedback would be able to help me a lot.
Here is the sample:
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/024/d/6/misticchain_by_razornion-d4ng2c2.jpg
Looking for help in Art - KajitiSouls - 2012-01-24
No line between the left sleeve (from PoV) and the main body. Either that, or the length of the sleeve doesn't match up with the other sleeve.
There's a continuous line between the front pocket and the main body. That doesn't make sense to me.
Generally, the picture suffers from subtle splotchy coloring, sketchy lines, and bad proportioning.
My 2 cents.
Looking for help in Art - Nion - 2012-01-24
KajitiSouls Wrote:No line between the left sleeve (from PoV) and the main body. Either that, or the length of the sleeve doesn't match up with the other sleeve.
There's a continuous line between the front pocket and the main body. That doesn't make sense to me.
Generally, the picture suffers from subtle splotchy coloring, sketchy lines, and bad proportioning.
My 2 cents.
Well I am a newbie when it comes to coloring.
And the continuous line is part of the design of the shirt; maybe I could have made it a bit more transparent.
Thank you for telling me these flaws.
I'll try my best to improve in it.
Looking for help in Art - raizoo - 2012-01-25
Gotta start with the basics, bro.
The proportions are way off. To be fair, it's a bit of a difficult pose because he's mostly looking at you straight on. Is he sitting up straight? Is he leaning forward a bit? Is he hunching forward a lot? It's hard for me to tell. Foreshortening is tricky.
We can look at folds later. Can't make believable folds if what they're covering isn't believable.