2009-04-07, 02:33 AM
I think this is excellent, especially the face... I'm no artist, so I can't give you advice on how to fix things, but a few things I'm going to point out:
1) If you stare directly at her face, you can make out her skull (as though she's bald). Not sure why.
2) Her hair curves a bit too much. If the wind were blowing that hard, the second wave (starting from her hair) should be bent back as far.
1) If you stare directly at her face, you can make out her skull (as though she's bald). Not sure why.
2) Her hair curves a bit too much. If the wind were blowing that hard, the second wave (starting from her hair) should be bent back as far.