Ablus Adventures!

First, if you want to improve your comics read This.

Ok, you have good ideas. The thing that turns me off the most is no background. The background is very important, and white space is... eh, it looks bad. I would also suggest trimming the chat boxes, and making some of the 2 or 3 panneled comics longer next time.

Read my guide, It has alot of good stuff in it, and if you have any questions just ask! =)

I dont like digging for half an hour in perion corner just for a good backgound for like, 5 comics. Its really hard cause it is unorganized and just plain stupid. Thanks for the advice though.