Maple Gone Cyber- Ep 1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0S_FNtfMC30

This is a new animated Series I just started. =)

I know I screwed up with the large text, and some of the animation Alignment. I'll fix those in Episode 2. x.x Make sure to Criticize.

~Thanks~

Reminds me of the Rockman Battle network games where there was a job board instead of a quest bored : P. There is always that guy who shows you around too. The metours really did it though, did you get your idea from there? : P.

Hmmm, watching all your banned story videos something always seems to annoy me about them... well, annoy isnt exactly the right word, but just something that doesnt feel right.

After watching this one, I think it has to do with your use of maple emoticons. Half the time, it seems as if you're sticking a "somewhat related" emoticon in there for every text bubble you have and it gets boring, repetitive and old after a while, not to mention they dont really match well at times either.

Additionally, this is the same thing you've been showing us over and over again with variations in plots. You use basically the same pool of music each time and the music is heard in countless other videos. There's just nothing overly original here, something that will get people to associate the videos with you.

The animations are smooth and done pretty well, however so are the animations of most people out there. There comes a point when just pro animation is not enough. You need a REAL plot, not something that you see around a hundred times on youtube as it is and if you can find one, then it'll make your works a lot better.