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Holy cow, I likey!
Right now, it looks like he has his thumb at the bottom of the barrel. Is that your intended purpose? If not, I think I would suggest adding a little more dimensions to the right arm. Right now the fingers look more like paper than metal.
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That's part of the minigun's rounds. I'm working on another barrel, more squarish and probably better looking.
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I think it's the angle of the barrel and the arm. Seems unlikely you'd carry it that way. The front end should be slightly more inward, I think. That or the elbow farther back.
Then again, what do I know. Anything I try to draw ends up being incredibly deformed. XD
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Yeah, the elbow further back. Looks more balanced.
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your style is tidy and very detailed, is it vector? what program are you using? looks very polished!
am not sure who two-ton tex is but - possibly the barrel arm could have a steeper gradient that only goes in one direction? at the moment it seems the elbow is affected by the line of the barrel which realistically should not be the case - this may be part of the caricature though
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I personally think that the barrel should be pointed more down, to make it look more natural. I, for one, wouldn't hold a gun that way.
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macromedia flash? that is a graphics program? for some reason i always thought it was a programming language of some sort
look forward to more of your work!