2012-03-13, 12:12 AM
godofturtles Wrote:Wow, it's not only not visitors, but it sounds like the HUGE beanstalk is the pathway to the stars. Wow, never thought we'd see that turn into part of the story before something like Krakia that already has backstory, very interesting.
More story!
godofturtles Wrote:The two obvious parts besides the awesome doorway image and wrecked town stick out:
"Rob and Stirgeman stood dumbstruck as the spotlights swung toward them and a horde of beanpole beasts from beyond the stars merged on their position."
and
"The gangly figures that walked amidst the site had large, glassy eyes that made it hard to tell where they were looking, and their strange, squeaky language sent a shiver down his spine."
Your reading comprehension leaves a bit to be desired.