2011-11-27, 02:47 AM
Im guessing these are using charcoal or black woodless color pencil.
The 5 minute drawings really show what you can do with the extra time.
The 1 minute drawings show promise, but the large amount of marks can be reduced with more practice, and more confidence in the marks. Basically, with less time, you want to give a quick run over marking key defining elements. You pushed a bit forward with it to try and capture more elements. Not bad, but its good to be able to hit the key marks and leaving the page clear to see them clearly.
I think the best image you got here is this one;
It has the definition, the medium detail, and being at 5 minutes. I would try to remember how you tackled this one and practice that more.
The 5 minute drawings really show what you can do with the extra time.
The 1 minute drawings show promise, but the large amount of marks can be reduced with more practice, and more confidence in the marks. Basically, with less time, you want to give a quick run over marking key defining elements. You pushed a bit forward with it to try and capture more elements. Not bad, but its good to be able to hit the key marks and leaving the page clear to see them clearly.
I think the best image you got here is this one;
Spoiler
It has the definition, the medium detail, and being at 5 minutes. I would try to remember how you tackled this one and practice that more.