2011-11-07, 12:45 AM
1) Eh, shading is one of the last things you should worry about on a pose like that. Playing with line volume is also cool.
2) I think my eyes were drawn more to the centre of the image. Just glancing over how the inking is nice, but there's so much more that could be done. ofc this doesn't mean too much if you're just doing this for fun, but being able to show people your work takes something else.
And it's more like the folds in her arm sleeve don't match up where the arm should be. But again, folds. ┐（￣ー￣）┌
3) Nah, could always pull the "it's hidden in the sleeve!" trick. I meant the other hand looks awkward.
I could never work with just ink with the way I am now, so I have to applaud you for that. And now I want to buy a dakimakura but too poorz. Spent nearly 300$ in newsprint. (ﾉยด∀｀*)
2) I think my eyes were drawn more to the centre of the image. Just glancing over how the inking is nice, but there's so much more that could be done. ofc this doesn't mean too much if you're just doing this for fun, but being able to show people your work takes something else.
And it's more like the folds in her arm sleeve don't match up where the arm should be. But again, folds. ┐（￣ー￣）┌
3) Nah, could always pull the "it's hidden in the sleeve!" trick. I meant the other hand looks awkward.
I could never work with just ink with the way I am now, so I have to applaud you for that. And now I want to buy a dakimakura but too poorz. Spent nearly 300$ in newsprint. (ﾉยด∀｀*)