2010-04-20, 05:20 PM
"Roses are red
Violets are blue
I hope you like this CD
because I really like you."
May sound a tad clingy (or some other similar term), but I think it's easier to do something with the traditional first two lines and rhyme the last word with "blue," as there are a lot...nicer sounding words that rhyme with it than with "frog."
That, or if you want to keep the OP four-line idea, maybe change the sense? Instead of smell, something like look? Maybe the whole idea of "you _______" isn't the best, unless it's giving them a compliment sans senses (like "you are my world" or something like that).
Violets are blue
I hope you like this CD
because I really like you."
May sound a tad clingy (or some other similar term), but I think it's easier to do something with the traditional first two lines and rhyme the last word with "blue," as there are a lot...nicer sounding words that rhyme with it than with "frog."
That, or if you want to keep the OP four-line idea, maybe change the sense? Instead of smell, something like look? Maybe the whole idea of "you _______" isn't the best, unless it's giving them a compliment sans senses (like "you are my world" or something like that).