[WIP]Two Tons Tex

Updatedened.

I think it's the angle of the barrel and the arm. Seems unlikely you'd carry it that way. The front end should be slightly more inward, I think. That or the elbow farther back.

Yeah, the elbow further back. Looks more balanced.

- possibly the barrel arm could have a steeper gradient that only goes in one direction? at the moment it seems the elbow is affected by the line of the barrel which realistically should not be the case - this may be part of the caricature though

I personally think that the barrel should be pointed more down, to make it look more natural. I, for one, wouldn't hold a gun that way.

There? Fixed?

Then again, what do I know. Anything I try to draw ends up being incredibly deformed. XD

Bah, you don't need to draw good to give good advice.

your style is tidy and very detailed, is it vector? what program are you using? looks very polished!

Yup. Use (back when it was still) Macromedia Flash, the brushtool and a tablet.

am not sure who two-ton tex is but

Something that's product of my imagination. A bit influenced by Twisted Grandmaster, Rellik.
Thanks for leaving comments, people!