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The Legend of -snip- Teaser - randompeep - 2009-01-19
Note: I do intend to repost this area and extend this with story and other things, but for now, you will have to make do. I actually do have a name for the continent, one of the -ia continents, but I don't need to say that yet. I'll give you this, it has something to do with Illyria.
Maps
Monsters
Story
other notes: IMO, I thought the Korilan Sea was the worst of my ideas, but we'll see soon enough...
further updates reserved for the regular post, not the teaser.
The Legend of -snip- Teaser - UnknownPower - 2009-01-19
You have a good start!
I have some reccomedations for you, though:
1) Add more maps~ You have a good start for the maps. But you should add more trick roads, or places of any sort.
2) Add more monsters~ Just a couple. You have the monsters, but a few more couldn't hurt much at all.
3) Find a solid story~ I'm not sure if I have to explain this any further.
Hope you consider these ideas!
Have a nice time with it!
The Legend of -snip- Teaser - randompeep - 2009-01-19
UnknownPower Wrote:You have a good start!
I have some reccomedations for you, though:
1) Add more maps~ You have a good start for the maps. But you should add more trick roads, or places of any sort.
Good point; this portion of the Korilan Sea always seemed too small to be the gap between Ossyria and the fabled continent.
2) Add more monsters~ Just a couple. You have the monsters, but a few more couldn't hurt much at all.
I have an Area Boss, but I didn't want it in the teaser. Otherwise, why not?
3) Find a solid story~ I'm not sure if I have to explain this any further.
Partially written.
Hope you consider these ideas!
Have a nice time with it!
I also already have 3 other areas partially completed, and 4 or 5 names for potential regions. The Saravim Steppes, where the last map is, is actually one of the 3 mostly completed regions.
The Legend of -snip- Teaser - UnknownPower - 2009-01-20
randompeep Wrote:I also already have 3 other areas partially completed, and 4 or 5 names for potential regions. The Saravim Steppes, where the last map is, is actually one of the 3 mostly completed regions.
Good job! Hope you succeed! This looks like it'll be good...
~UnknownPower (A.K.A. Johnsuters2)
P.S. Check out mine if you want!
It's my first one, so please go easy on my.
