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The walls are closing in
The dark is over the light.
There are barriers on my way
My way to life thats bright.
But amidst the setbacks
And obstacles on the way,
My hearts on the right track
And prepared for the next day.
Theres no room for fear
Or tears on my path.
Whatever I do, I trust myself.
I will survive my enemies wrath.
No matter the rain or storms on the way
The wind will be there to guide me.
My courage is greatly overflowing
As vast as the sky and the sea.
Every challenge I encounter,
I will fight and win.
Every walls I run into,
I will break and go between.
There may be rivals
And all other competitors
But Im more inspired
To be one of the victors!
This never-ending journey
Just gets better and better!
When there are challenges,
I become tougher and tougher!
Let it rain, let it shine
Let there be no light.
I will still run and run
For the night skys starlight!
If I could fly high,
What a joy it could be!
Lets dash to the clouds,
With those birds, so free!
Challenger, go on!
Advance to that path thats everlasting!
Aim for the sky, fear not the dark
The bud of your dreams is, hey, growing!
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This was my first serious poem...
So... it needs comments and constructive criticisms
Other poems:
Spoiler
That Night
In a night, a psychotic night,
So confused, I'm hypnotized.
Please release me from this
I'm becoming mesmerized..
It's coming to me, it's too much
Let me go and break free..
Make me see the light
Drop this curse from me..
How can I escape this?
Can I turn the way around?
Is this just my mind,
That's making that sound?
I'm trembling, all puzzled
It's distorting, this rave
Drive this night away,
The morning is what I crave.
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Waiting for Yesterday
A warm greeting, a pleasant smile
Laughter, fun, and happiness
Running around, feeling safe
To venture to the wilderness.
Evergreen trees, are what I like
The flowers, clean air, clear rivers
But what I see now is trash
The smoke, the flies, the litters!
Dreaming about the times
When it was as sweet as May
Here I am in my room,
Waiting for yesterday...
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The Guy (my gift to my brother for his birthday :])
A skilled person, a talented guy
Always ready to take my pics!
Singing, with dancing, with anything!
What else could you mix?
A good leader, a speaker
The guide, the light
Fun and laughter is his friend,
Success is his might!
A friend, nice guy, your pal
Talks to you, eases your pain!
A kind, amiable companion,
Won't leave you whether the rain!
A sweetheart, a romantic one!
Always ready to please his love
Roses and chocolates on your desk
He will love you like a dove!
But most of all, among all these
He is my gentle and loving bro.
Helping me through my struggles
Cuddles me like a pillow!
And all of these, are what he is
A great man, isn't it true?
But before I end this poem of mine,
I say "Happy birthday to you."
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Dimensions
Each year is a new year
New places, new missions
Taking me to other dimensions.
This long adventure goes on
I know I'll be better than then
I know success is like the heaven.
Learning from adventures of the past
Looking forward to future's surprises
Always preparing for present's challenges.
Hindrances may be in my way
But I'm sure I can break free
I will build bridges to my destiny.
I'll conquer the dimensions
This vast world might contain
The treasure of joy, I'll obtain.
