+- Southperry.net (https://www.southperry.net)
+-- Forum: Arts & Entertainment (https://www.southperry.net/forumdisplay.php?fid=12)
+--- Forum: Expressive Arts (https://www.southperry.net/forumdisplay.php?fid=70)
+---- Forum: The Shady Tree (https://www.southperry.net/forumdisplay.php?fid=85)
+---- Thread: lol my first serious poem ever? (/showthread.php?tid=11777)
lol my first serious poem ever? - DeviantSteve - 2009-05-29
Oh gosh!
I guess since I kind of migrated here to stalk a friend this thread is solely for their amusement and maybe a few others.
I see this section gets very little feedback. Perhaps poetry is not that popular among maplers. =P
Untitled nonsense, mhmmmm. Alright well, I'm no poet, this is just fun with my mind.
edit: excuse my misuse of commas in some parts hahahaha
Oh what words can do, wonderous, evocative, words
trandscendent through minds, human minds
the unity that brings together, the disconnect of language
the reformatting of thoughts, the embracing of ideas
the belief in something, not inside
but around you, a belief in an enigmatic, obscure
something...using an adjective to describe what cannot be portrayed
"odd" one might think, but that is the language
that is the love of said language, that is the potential
that is human achievement
lying there to be judged by subjective eyes
jury not quite unanimous, never a true peer review
more-so an amalgam of opinions
the melting pot of sentience
the stew of our growth, which is slowly heated
under the sphere of hydrogen which we call a star
an infinite regress to our former state
is what it might seem to be
fate one may say, reality the other
an incomparable standard
which we hold our selves up to
in our somewhat subconscious hopes
our visions behind the rapid eye movement
between the hours of dusk and dawn
as each day comes, wishes and fears fluctuate
imagination fades, conformity fades
everything fades, but words can do it all- with effort
strength from what you surround yourself with
motivation from that which you cannot obtain
I define life as a blank page and a full mind