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  1. the Immutable Neuter
    IGN: Stephen
    Server: U.S.A.
    Level: 25
    Job: Sailor
    Guild: USN
    Alliance: VAQ-141 Shadowhawks
    ireland

    Default Requesting feedback


    I put this rough draft up on my blog I recently discovered I had, and was hoping to get some feedback and constructive criticism, if that's ok.
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    I kinda just went with what it was in my head, and didn't really look back. It's still in a rough-state, and im not sure if I want to go about tweaking it a bit. Just hoping to see what people think about it.
    Thank you.
    Last edited by Mute; 2014-02-21 at 09:36 AM.

  2. Donator Straight Female
    IGN: icephoenix21
    Server: Scania
    Level: 212
    Job: Bishop
    Guild: DremithCross
    Alliance: Evolution
    Farm: IcePhoenix
    canada

    Default Re: Requesting feedback


    formatting into stanzas or whatnot would help ease the eyes.

  3. the Immutable Neuter
    IGN: Stephen
    Server: U.S.A.
    Level: 25
    Job: Sailor
    Guild: USN
    Alliance: VAQ-141 Shadowhawks
    ireland

    Default Re: Requesting feedback


    sorry, I just copy-pasted it from the blog. =P

  4. Default Re: Requesting feedback


    My interpretation/suggestions


    I'll probably do more later, but that's all I got for now

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