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  1. Orbital Bee Cannon
    IGN: SaptaZapta
    Server: Kradia
    Level: 275
    Job: Hero
    Guild: Matriarchy
    Alliance: Peaceful

    Default Re: More Realistic Sketches


    I don't know a thing about drawing, realistic or not, but the nose looks all wrong to me. "cute upturned" is fine, but the vertical beginning makes it look like it's either broken or has a horn growing on it.

  2. ~Thrust Into It~ Straight Male
    IGN: Sn1perel1te
    Server: Bellocan
    Level: 152
    Job: Old School BM
    Guild: EbonSol
    Alliance: In One
    California

    Default Re: More Realistic Sketches


    Realistic implies life-like. I see some of that, and the opposite of that. Looks good though mang.

  3. Default Re: More Realistic Sketches


    The nose looks weird, maybe make it a bit lower. Her left eye looks too big and should be lowered a bit. There might be a problem with the mouth, but it might just be the nose.

    Definitely fix the nose.

  4. Can of Soup Male
    IGN: LunaMimosa
    Server: El Nido
    Level: 134
    Job: OP Elf Queen
    Guild: Some no-name guild
    Alliance: Read above.

    Default Re: More Realistic Sketches


    I have a huge problem with it; she's not my girlfriend.

    Nah but really, I'm still a learner myself, but I'll agree on the nose too, though i'm too beginner to help on that (they're my weakness with faces). as for the mouth, maybe it needs a little contour line on the left to help define that the lips are protruding a little and not flat all the way to her cheek.

    Or maybe i'm biased and like full lips aww yessss

  5. Default Re: More Realistic Sketches


    I personally like the nose. Its different, but not all that bad. Probably wouldn't classify it as "realistic" though.

  6. Default Re: More Realistic Sketches


    I really like her lips.

    But yeah, realistic = lifelike? If that's what you're implying it's truly not. If you'd like critique, I think you have to first define what you mean by realistic.
    But it is a very cute caricature of a human girl :)

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