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  1. AFK at Ch 18 Leafre Straight Male
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    Default Looking for help in Art


    Hey there, people of SP.
    I was wondering whether you guys and gals are able to help me with this problem I have.
    Currently, I'm trying to improve my artwork a lot in order to impress some people.

    Is there anyone here able to critique a sample of my work?
    I feel as if getting feedback would be able to help me a lot. :)


    Here is the sample:
    http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...on-d4ng2c2.jpg

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    No line between the left sleeve (from PoV) and the main body. Either that, or the length of the sleeve doesn't match up with the other sleeve.

    There's a continuous line between the front pocket and the main body. That doesn't make sense to me.

    Generally, the picture suffers from subtle splotchy coloring, sketchy lines, and bad proportioning.

    My 2 cents.

  3. AFK at Ch 18 Leafre Straight Male
    Nion's Avatar [Jr. Event Coordinator]

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    Default Re: Looking for help in Art


    Well I am a newbie when it comes to coloring. :P
    And the continuous line is part of the design of the shirt; maybe I could have made it a bit more transparent.

    Thank you for telling me these flaws.
    I'll try my best to improve in it.

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    Gotta start with the basics, bro.

    The proportions are way off. To be fair, it's a bit of a difficult pose because he's mostly looking at you straight on. Is he sitting up straight? Is he leaning forward a bit? Is he hunching forward a lot? It's hard for me to tell. Foreshortening is tricky.

    We can look at folds later. Can't make believable folds if what they're covering isn't believable.

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