This one is still way better than previous attempts. The eyes and teeth once again are the biggest issue. Just look so out of place.
This one is still way better than previous attempts. The eyes and teeth once again are the biggest issue. Just look so out of place.
Gah. Is it better like this?
Yeah, now he looks badass. The fangs were the main attention draw before; now I see his scar and hair. He looks like a real ruffian.
Best monster to date, Aslemn!
You improved the shading greatly, nice job.
You could try this effect (forgot the name) that drops out some shades of colors and sharpens the shadows for it. Now it looks too blurry for maple monster.Originally Posted by aslemn
Gah. Is it better like this?
Other than that it's great
EDIT:
Saw the previous attempt.
Then try this tip:
Don't increase the amount of shadowing, but instead, focus on not making too strong shadows. Try to change the saturation of the color just a little bit, so that it is just enough to be noticed, but no more than that. Or even add a little nuance of some other color for it(ofc something that is close to that color though). For example in my avatars hair, some of the shadows are purpleish and some are just bright red. How important this is also depends a bit on the color sheme of the custom.
As for the "Rien mobs in steroids", make the bottom for more flat so it seems like they are actually on ground and not floating.
I don't seem to be able to do like you said, Sat. Or either it comes terrible when completely pixelated, or it becomes good but not mapley with blurry shading. Tried for like one hour different kinds on shading in this boss, and the only decent one was the blurry like :S
I like it and man that seems like an awesome boss idea (multiple bosses) but once again... those eyes. I just can't pinpoint what's wrong with them. I think maybe they're too bright, or perhaps it's the outline is too thick.
Regarding the eyes: I think it has something to do with the shading of the faces. Right now, the faces are fairly round, with no definition. You need to define the cheeks more and make the eye area look just a little sunken in.
Like this? As i see the MS faces have a little shade between and under the eyes. :o
WOW
So much better!
You should try and adjust some of the other images just to see how it looks.
Gonna try that! Thanks :>
Looks so much better :> Thanks for the advice.
Eh, still feel like that one doesn't fit maple.
But you're definitely improving. Looking forward to your future creations a lot more now.
Yeah yeah like that! Awesome!
Yeah, it's moving forward.
These mobs are starting to look better and better every time you post the newest one. Id have to agree with the others about the bottom of the Rien mobs with its non-ms look. As for the leaf and eyes look fantastic.
For the bird, it seems a little sharp, the top left most part of its head where it seems to flatten out seems like it should curve more. I like what you have done with the wings and feet. Especially the red coating on them.
With the scorpion, i dont know if its just accidental or intended, but it seems a white pixel seems to be misplaced, on the second strand of hair. Otherwise, perfect.
The symbols (forehead and bandanna), they add a certain something* to the mob then if it wasn't there. : ) Keep up the great work
*can't think of the right word, or too many to put in
Last edited by rubberband; 2011-04-03 at 02:47 AM.
Your work improved from the last time I looked. Which was only about a week!
Keep it up and you shall make pony pictures for us.
LOL, no, actually, don't do that, the pony hype started dying lol.
L>Signature? :D
Thanks. Didn't even notice that white pixel in the hair :S
I noticed it on the bird's head tho, it doesn't look as round as it's supposed to. Gotta fix these :o
Np, pleasure to help.
Any hints on what you're working on now? :)
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