A Bannedstory sprite edit I did

[JezzaRules]

Ok, I made a One Piece anime character from Bannedstory and I need some comments and suggestions on this.

Anime character:

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Bannedstory edit:

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The left char is 'flat chested' and the one on the right is my unsuccessful attempt to edit her 'chest'

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I added my third attempt on the far right. Many thanks to Loose who helped me structured her... well... chest.

So what do you think?

[Corn]

It's *decent*, but not the best, lol.

If you want big bewb examples, look at Loose. If those are too big, (lol), try mimicing the effect of the thief female's level 35 blue/black/red/purple Avenger.

I think the bangs of the hair should be closer to the eyes, too. but meh.

Overall, a decent attempt at Boa Hancock, probably better than a lot of people can do, but it still can be better.

[GMSInfighter]

Pretty good, but just a few things.

- The hair is a bit different. You made her look like she has a combover in the front, she kind of has a feminine tristan haircut.
- You could have added small details such as altair earrings and recoloring them to yellow/orangeish. -Her earrings look a lot like them-

Everything else is great.

[Mark]

Needs bigger boobs.

[Loose]

This might help.

[Asumi]

This might help.

WTH?

[Loose]

Spritesheet, ese.

[Mark]

this might help.

LMFAO.

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[MasPan]

This might help.

This thing is fun :D

[Dual]

This thing is fun :D

So does this mean you just added to Opeth's trolling powers?

[JezzaRules]

Thanks Loose
This would help me a bit in redesigning Boa Hancock.

[TřbiasBlack]

Thanks Loose
This would help me a bit in redesigning Boa Hancock.

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with that pic, that names just an obvious innuendo. "Boa," snake, analogous to a phallus, and "Hancock?" do i even need to? >_>

i like the 3rd one, but, IMO, the dress can be done better.

[Loose]

Good job, keep working on it!

[bio9205]

This might help.

What the...?

[Vovez]

not a usefull post:

but i think i see a part of vay jay on the ref pic o3o