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randompeep
2009-01-19, 01:49 PM
Note: I do intend to repost this area and extend this with story and other things, but for now, you will have to make do. I actually do have a name for the continent, one of the -ia continents, but I don't need to say that yet. I'll give you this, it has something to do with Illyria.

Aqua Road: Deserted Ocean Path I
Aqua Road: Deserted Ocean Path II
Aqua Road: Deserted Ocean Path III
Aqua Road: Descent into the Trench

Korilan Sea: Unforgiving Trench I
Korilan Sea: Unforgiving Trench II
Korilan Sea: The Crushing Depths I
Korilan Sea: The Trench of Sharks
Korilan Sea: A Sea of Fish (still the Trench)
Korilan Sea: The Crushing Depths II
Korilan Sea: Unforgiving Trench III
Korilan Sea: Unforgiving Trench IV

Hidden Street: A Serene Path (still the Trench)
Hidden Street: An End to the Depths
Korilan Sea: The Uplifting Tide
Korilan Sea: The Distant Shore

Saravim Steppes: Aqui Outpost

Notes: The first four maps are part of Ossyria, but from the Korilan Sea onward, you are no longer in Ossyria. Unforgiving Trench IV loops back to I, so you must find the hidden portal to A Serene Path, not easy with literally dozens of tuna or many sharks behind you! The Squid still spawns in the Path, though. Aqui Outpost is on the new continent, which name is not Korilia.

Dolphin
-looks like the Dolphin Taxi NPC, but these are a bit hostile

Jellyfish
-A slime that grew tentacles somehow. Has a nasty shock if you get too close.

Sea Jelly
-A light blue slime. (as in, a light blue that can camoflage it with the background)

Swordfish
-Very fast (~60 speed, haven't yet made stats), and it has a ramming attack that hits 2k! At least it doesn't auto-aggro.

Shark
-The very same ones as already exist, except it can freely swim.

Cold Shark
-Same as Shark

Hammerhead Shark
-A grey color, these are substantially stronger than their cousins. Warning, these can cause weaken, and can freely swim, cornering you at the bottom!

Bluefin Tuna
-Think you'll have easy pickings now? Wrong! These have a ton of Defense and HP, so most will have trouble passing them in the Sea of Fish. However, they don't have much M. Def., but being at the bottom of the ocean, they are Fire and Ice resistant, so keep that in mind.

Giant Squid
-Occasionally, one of these spawns in the Trench maps. It has the ink mist of Risell Squids, plus the Jaw attacks of Sharks. Plus, it can wrap you in one of its tentacles and squeeze the life out of you, or it could slap as many as 5 people across the map! Thankfully, it doesn't move fast, but it can be tough to hit past the hordes of other mobs.

Coming in the non-teaser post!

other notes: IMO, I thought the Korilan Sea was the worst of my ideas, but we'll see soon enough...
further updates reserved for the regular post, not the teaser.

UnknownPower
2009-01-19, 07:15 PM
You have a good start! :f2:
I have some reccomedations for you, though:
1) Add more maps~ You have a good start for the maps. But you should add more trick roads, or places of any sort.
2) Add more monsters~ Just a couple. You have the monsters, but a few more couldn't hurt much at all.
3) Find a solid story~ I'm not sure if I have to explain this any further.
Hope you consider these ideas! :cool:
Have a nice time with it!

randompeep
2009-01-19, 07:57 PM
You have a good start! :f2:
I have some reccomedations for you, though:
1) Add more maps~ You have a good start for the maps. But you should add more trick roads, or places of any sort.
Good point; this portion of the Korilan Sea always seemed too small to be the gap between Ossyria and the fabled continent.
2) Add more monsters~ Just a couple. You have the monsters, but a few more couldn't hurt much at all.
I have an Area Boss, but I didn't want it in the teaser. Otherwise, why not?
3) Find a solid story~ I'm not sure if I have to explain this any further.
Partially written.
Hope you consider these ideas! :cool:
Have a nice time with it!

I also already have 3 other areas partially completed, and 4 or 5 names for potential regions. The Saravim Steppes, where the last map is, is actually one of the 3 mostly completed regions.

UnknownPower
2009-01-20, 09:21 PM
I also already have 3 other areas partially completed, and 4 or 5 names for potential regions. The Saravim Steppes, where the last map is, is actually one of the 3 mostly completed regions.

Good job! Hope you succeed! This looks like it'll be good... :shine:

~UnknownPower (A.K.A. Johnsuters2)

P.S. Check out mine if you want! :f2:
It's my first one, so please go easy on my. :wink: