Help me make this comic better.

[TheSmartGuy]

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I like the joke, but the comic doesn't feel right... got any tips on how to make it better? (No, I am not going to add a background)

[NoWaizMatt]

Mmm. Try putting the CS panel first, then have the dude holding crack something like, "Like muh new gun?"

[Ribbon]

Panel I: Title is fine as is.

Panel II. Have a group of "bishops" or "hermits" or "any other class" badmouthing how bad Pirates are.

Panel III. Have the green afro character chase after a monster and the monster looks like it's going to s--t bricks and they both go off screen with the group of "one class" doing the f6 or any other surprised face.

Panel IV. Have like a sfx like "Boom" or even use like an atom bomb picture to fill up the whole panel. You could have optional damage caption like 999,999,999,999 if you so desire on top of it.

Panel V. Have the character come back from the side he chased the monster with the expression Presented in Panel II of your original with the same text, "New NX item" and then walk off.

Panel VI. Try sarcasm. Have a little kid npc say, "Thank you Nexon!" like Nella from Kerning City or one of those four fairy girls that are required for weddings and if you could, edit [The Jackal] caption to include in it's info box, [Buy] [Buy Young Child Pack] [Buy Whole Family Pack]

[Blankout]

Panel I: Title is fine as is.

Panel II. Have a group of "bishops" or "hermits" or "any other class" badmouthing how bad Pirates are.

Panel III. Have the green afro character chase after a monster and the monster looks like it's going to s--t bricks and they both go off screen with the group of "one class" doing the f6 or any other surprised face.

Panel IV. Have like a sfx like "Boom" or even use like an atom bomb picture to fill up the whole panel. You could have optional damage caption like 999,999,999,999 if you so desire on top of it.

Panel V. Have the character come back from the side he chased the monster with the expression Presented in Panel II of your original with the same text, "New NX item" and then walk off.

Panel VI. Try sarcasm. Have a little kid npc say, "Thank you Nexon!" like Nella from Kerning City or one of those four fairy girls that are required for weddings and if you could, edit [The Jackal] caption to include in it's info box, [Buy] [Buy Young Child Pack] [Buy Whole Family Pack]

That kind of changes the joke...