PDA

View Full Version : Story of the Thief Hero [not of Phantom]



MrTouchnGo
2011-12-12, 02:05 AM
Yeah, I realize Phantom's out now and all that, but I started this over the summer, and people seem to like it, so I'll probably be continuing it until it's finished. It just occurred to me that I could post this on Southperry, so here I am.

This is a story about my idea for the Thief Hero, and is unrelated to Phantom.

I'm looking for any feedback in general, although constructive criticism would be excellent. Links are below if you're interested!

Here's what I posted on Basil: http://www.basilmarket.com/forum/2283286/0/Story_of_the_Thief_Hero_Part_10.html
(I tag everyone who asks every time I update, so it shows up under the quoted tab)

Here's the fanfiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7397125/1/The_Thief_Hero
(I don't update that one as often as I update on Basil)