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MariaColette
2009-09-18, 03:16 AM
Since I had to met someone at 5:30 AM, I decided "pineapple sleep" and just stayed up since I'm going on a 5 hour drive anyway.

So this is what I did to kill time... busted out MSPaint and started sketching. I'm really proud of this, especially since I haven't actually taken my time in drawing in a while.

So since I'm so happy with the progress, I need to know what needs to be fixed so I can finish it. SUGGESTlONS PLZ.

Also, perspective is a peach. It's hard to do. ._.

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c373/Sujinpuff/rellik-3.png

EDIT: Fixed some things that bothered me; made the folds on the cloak a bit better, made the pistol-crossbow more... round.
Lost my Mind.
2009-09-19, 08:46 AM
What you've done so far is impressive and looks great.

Theres that extra nozzle/barrel(?) thing on the end of the crossbow/gun that could be added, but not really necessary.
The frill(?) of the glove could be bulked up a little more, but thats just a pet peeve kind of thing.

I'm not art-savvy so feel free to ignore my rather miniscule qualms with your work. Looking forward to seeing the final product.
WillDaSnail
2009-09-19, 01:21 PM
If that's done on MS paint....

You're God. Seroiusly. Nice job. :f2:
KajitiSouls
2009-09-19, 10:43 PM
If that's done on MS paint....

You're God. Seroiusly. Nice job. :f2:

That looks like the equivalent of a pencil sketch, only with the mouse. No offense.

The details are pretty good so far however xD
Serene
2009-09-21, 01:51 AM
the three fingers threw me off a bit otherwise it looks awsome f5
MariaColette
2009-09-21, 02:08 AM
the three fingers threw me off a bit otherwise it looks awsome f5

It took me a while to find your post, I thought it was empty for a sec. :f6:

But yeah, that was intended since some people draw characters with 3 fingers instead of 4. :p

I already started on the lineart with some minor fixings, thanks guys. (:
MariaColette
2009-09-25, 01:41 AM
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH SO MANY LAYERS and I ain't even halfway done yet. :f4:

Just wanted to show how it's going so far nyehh@@

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c373/Sujinpuff/rellikcolor.png

I can still make changes, as long as they aren't TOO big (I <3 SAI's editing tool), so if there's anything, please let me know. I plan on making this my best 100% digitally drawn fanart. :B

Something about the arm bothers me, though, just don't know what exactly...