MMV- Wait For You

[lightk]

Er... First Sony Vegas MMV? D:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C3BRmbVlu8I

After working on it for a while, I realized I made many flaws in this. It would take me too long to list them all out. But Im pretty sure there's some I didn't catch. So yea Constructive Critisim is highly appreciated, and dont go easy on me just because its my first.

[KingCain]

It was good for your first one but you kinda over did effects at some parts.
And the male character kinda gave me an eyesore but thats me.

7/10
:f2:

[Russt]

That's some pretty heavy effect-tion.
(Bad pun intended.)

[Infection]

A lot of effects are way overdone.. IMO something simple in the beginning where it's just the piano.
7.5/10.

[chrome]

Everything said above about the effects, plus the text color coordination is eh.